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Write The Second Draft of Your Screenplay
This is it! You’re one step away from completing this course. Feedback on this assignment will give you an honest opinion on your movie script. This assignment will help you complete the final version of your movie script. When you’ve got your feedback on this assignment, I’m done with calling you a student. From then on you’ll be my collegue.
The Assignment you need to complete to improve from the feedback of Mr. McGill
Read the set of questions from a script report based around the basic concept and plot of your script. Your assignment is to read the specific notes attached to your first draft and apply these questions to your first draft. Then write a second draft.
Feedback will at first hand focus on the following features of your assignment
• Assessment is feedback on assignment “Write the first draft of your film script”.
• You will have to complete the assignment “Write the first draft of your film script”, before bringing this one on!
About the Tutor
Brian McGill has been a professional scriptwriter for twenty five years and has written for several television series in the UK, including Taggart (Scottish Television), A and E (Thames) and Call Red (Granada) as well as a feature film in France (La Guerre Des Moutons).
He has also been commissioned to write many feature film scripts in the UK, Germany, France, Sweden and the USA (for Phyllis Carlyle – co-producer of Se7en). Amongst several awards, Brian received a Scottish International Education Trust grant (run by Sir Sean Connery) to attend NYU film school in New York. He presently teaches film writing at Edinburgh Napier University, Scotland and at Örebro University, Sweden.
Reading and external links
Read everything ever written about scriptwriting. Or better yet, just start writing.